The last part of this chapter, part 3, is now online at http://www.spellborn.org/214/amane’s-journey-chapter-1-part-3-another-dull-day

Don't forget to tell me what you think about it

Haven't really had the time to read it yet, but when I have, I certainly will!

Aaaah the story is starting to feel alive! I like it!

Aaaah the story is starting to feel alive! I like it!

Lots more is coming up

Was this first chapter okay in length?

Lots more is coming up

Was this first chapter okay in length?

Yeah but like we discussed before we dont need to get this big timegaps between the releases I am working on my chapter now and I am thinking of holding your template for example. ;]

Yeah but like we discussed before we dont need to get this big timegaps between the releases I am working on my chapter now and I am thinking of holding your template for example. ;]

There are timegaps in between because of the delays we have all of the time

But I'm working on making those delays shorter or simply gone.

I like it